Proofreading my FAQ?

OmbooHankvald · 2005-07-06, 08:46

Hi. I've tried to write a guide to how to operate PSP, S/R B5 and 321 from Mersenneforum.

I was wondering if any of you would bother proofreading it? I'm not an expert so I've probably screwed up somewhere.

Also, any suggestions would be great!
It can be found here

To be honest, I think ldautch's version was a bit outdated (it linked to LLR 2.0).

Thanks in advance
OH

2005-07-06, 15:18

looks good and is no too short! good work

OmbooHankvald · 2005-07-06, 16:35

Thanks! If it's useful, will you consider maybe linking to it in the "getting started" thread? I would really appreciate it!

Citrix · 2005-07-07, 04:33

How about adding instructions for LLRnet?

Citrix

OmbooHankvald · 2005-07-07, 07:33

Quote:

Originally Posted by Citrix

How about adding instructions for LLRnet?

Citrix

Great idea (I forgot about it). Coming up probably in a day or two.

OmbooHankvald · 2005-07-07, 10:05

Done. Is it ok or have I missed something?

em99010pepe · 2005-07-07, 10:18

OmbooHankvald,

Good work!

I'm still reading what you have done but I have a doubt in the Sieving a range with Mikael Klasson’s proth_sieve section. In point 4 you have the link for sob.dat. That one is for SOB project but I usually use this one for PSP project.
My doubt is: are both the same file ( I really dont know)?If not you should add both links.

Cheers,

Carlos

Mystwalker · 2005-07-07, 11:03

That's right, the sob.dat are different.

btw.:
Omboo, could you change the coloring a bit? Esp. the links are not that easy to read on the black background.
But concerning the contents, I really like your manual.

OmbooHankvald · 2005-07-07, 15:46

Thanks both of you!

I've tried fixing it. Unfortunately I suck at colouring, but I've tried something a little more simple.
Better?

ltd · 2005-07-07, 20:09

Thanks for the very good job you did with your guide text.

Lars

em99010pepe · 2005-07-07, 20:31

OmbooHankvald,

Sorry but one more thing I think you should add to your great guide.
I use this software to monitor and control my sieve range. It also estimates the crunching time.

Cheers,

Carlos

2005-07-06, 08:46	#1
OmbooHankvald May 2005 Copenhagen, Denmark 441₈ Posts	Proofreading my FAQ? Hi. I've tried to write a guide to how to operate PSP, S/R B5 and 321 from Mersenneforum. I was wondering if any of you would bother proofreading it? I'm not an expert so I've probably screwed up somewhere. Also, any suggestions would be great! It can be found here To be honest, I think ldautch's version was a bit outdated (it linked to LLR 2.0). Thanks in advance OH

2005-07-07, 10:18	#7
em99010pepe Sep 2004 B0E₁₆ Posts	OmbooHankvald, Good work! I'm still reading what you have done but I have a doubt in the Sieving a range with Mikael Klasson’s proth_sieve section. In point 4 you have the link for sob.dat. That one is for SOB project but I usually use this one for PSP project. My doubt is: are both the same file ( I really dont know)?If not you should add both links. Cheers, Carlos Last fiddled with by em99010pepe on 2005-07-07 at 10:19

2005-07-07, 20:31	#11
em99010pepe Sep 2004 2×5×283 Posts	OmbooHankvald, Sorry but one more thing I think you should add to your great guide. I use this software to monitor and control my sieve range. It also estimates the crunching time. Cheers, Carlos Last fiddled with by em99010pepe on 2005-07-07 at 20:32

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2005-07-06, 15:18	#2
thommy 2²×3⁴ Posts	looks good and is no too short! good work

2005-07-06, 16:35	#3
OmbooHankvald May 2005 Copenhagen, Denmark 17² Posts	Thanks! If it's useful, will you consider maybe linking to it in the "getting started" thread? I would really appreciate it!

2005-07-07, 04:33	#4
Citrix Jun 2003 2·7·113 Posts	How about adding instructions for LLRnet? Citrix

2005-07-07, 10:05	#6
OmbooHankvald May 2005 Copenhagen, Denmark 17² Posts	Done. Is it ok or have I missed something?

2005-07-07, 11:03	#8
Mystwalker Jul 2004 Potsdam, Germany 1100111111₂ Posts	That's right, the sob.dat are different. btw.: Omboo, could you change the coloring a bit? Esp. the links are not that easy to read on the black background. But concerning the contents, I really like your manual.

2005-07-07, 15:46	#9
OmbooHankvald May 2005 Copenhagen, Denmark 17² Posts	Thanks both of you! I've tried fixing it. Unfortunately I suck at colouring, but I've tried something a little more simple. Better?

2005-07-07, 20:09	#10
ltd Apr 2003 2²×193 Posts	Thanks for the very good job you did with your guide text. Lars